- Number of "I/me"s per line. The more the worse.
Similarly, a church song can tie into the positive aspects of Christianity more powerfully if it avoids the use of I/Me.
- God as cosmic boyfriend.
God is not your cosmic boyfriend. If you think he is, you've made an idol in your mind. See commandment #2. If you sing songs this frivilous about deity, I think you are also violating commandment #3.
- The song works as well for Allah or Buddha
Trouble with this approach is that the Psalms are often translated into songs that speak accurately of God, but don't mention Christ.
- It's a 7/11 song: 7 words repeated 11 times